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Teacher Brian,
How are your friendships different now than they were when you were a child?
How are your friendships different now than they were when you were a child?
When i was young, I beilived that school friends and friendships will be last forever.
>> When I was young, I believed that friendships last forever
I thought it would still be which our topic of conversation, our favorite prank and we had been often go to the school snack shop etc...
>> I thought that we would have the same old bonding time like pranks, having snacks and go to school together and so on.
But we went to different high-school and colleges As the years go by the things that we share had dwindled.
>> but everything change when we went to different high-schools and colleges, as the years pass by the things we share dwindled
We could meet everyday without even making time, but now we should be plan the exactly place, time, date to meet.
>> unlike before, we need to schedule everything just to see each other
And it is so difficult to arrange the time because we are very busy.
>> and it\'s quite difficult to arrange the schedule because all of us are very busy
As the saying goes \'Familiar paths and old friends are the best\' so I\'m happy that i have old friends.
>> As the saying goes \'Familiar paths and old friends are the best\' that\'s why I\'m happy that I have old friends.
But i sometimes miss the days when we met everyday and shared everything about each other qualms.
>> but sometimes I miss the old days when we meet everyday and shared everything to each other.
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