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Hi there Ms. [이름]!
If it\'s a donation, it\'s suppose to be voluntary given. Maybe, they don\'t like to arts or museums. But I believe there are a lot of people who help your government to preserve your cultural heritage in museums. As far as I know, you have many treasures. See you on Monday!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
It is difficult for me.
>> correct!
In my country, government has very difficult situation so it can\'t spend money on art and museums.
>> In my country, the government is under a very difficult situation so it can\'t spend money on arts and museums.
So I think many rich companies can help them.
>> correct!
OR>> I think, rich companies should help them.
Some rich companies don\'t donate despite the rich.
>> Some rich companies don\'t donate despite their wealth.
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