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2016-11-18 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I like dogs than cats. I think dogs very smart than cats also cats are very selfish but dogs are not. I had been watch TV many dogs to save people but I hadn't been watch TV about cats. However I don't like keeping dogs at home because I must have a lot of house chors. Also it is very difficult to keep them which seems like babies so I have to take care of them all days. I don't have much confidence.

강사 첨삭


Hi there Ms. [이름],

I like dogs better than cats too. I hate cat furs. They tend to scratch everything in the house too. But you\'re right, taking care of any pet is hard. So it\'s better to have none.

See you on Monday!

Take care!

~T. Lynn

I like dogs than cats.

>> I like dogs better than cats.
I think dogs very smart than cats also cats are very selfish but dogs are not.

>> I think dogs are smarter than cats and also cats are very selfish but dogs are not.

I had been watch TV many dogs to save people but I hadn\'t been watch TV about cats.

>> I had been watching on TV many dogs save people but I hadn\'t seen anything about cats.

However I don\'t like keeping dogs at home because I must have a lot of house chors.

>> However, I don\'t like keeping dogs at home because I must do a lot of house chores.
Also it is very difficult to keep them which seems like babies so I have to take care of them all days.
>>
Also it is very difficult to keep them because they seem like babies so I have to take care of them all day.

I don\'t have much confidence.

>> correct!
OR>> I am not confident I can do that.

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