4-6th Homework

Hi, [이름]!

It\'s finally Friday! ^_^

Thanks for writing in our composition board again.

I think maintaining a good self-esteem is learned at home.

Parents have a big role in making sure that their children grow as individuals with a high self-worth.

When parents fail to teach their children about self-worth, their children could grow as individuals with a low self-esteem.

Aside from the parents, I think the teachers in schools also play an important role in teaching students how to have a good view of themselves.

When a teacher fails to do his job as a motivator, the students will eventually grow up as individuals with self-esteem issues.

Bullying has a very big impact on our self-esteem.

Our self-worth goes down when we are unreasonably criticized by others.

I think it is true that our self-esteem is greatly affected by our interaction with others.

Anyhow, this is my point-of-view in this matter.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you again on Tuesday.

~Teacher C[이름]

I think the very important thing when we feel the self-worth is ourselves consent.

>> [Do you mean]: I think the very important thing in life is feeling our self-worth.

In many cases, there are completed cases hard to solve its.

>> In many cases, there are completed cases that are hard to solve.
Even if these are very difficult to manage it, but if we change our mind on the problems, the situation would become easy.

>> Even if it is very difficult to manage it, if we change our outlook/view on the problems, the situation would become easy.
Inferiority is not a simple feeling.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Feeling inferior is not a good thing.
This feeling is easily shown in our surrounding.

>> This feeling is easily shown in our surroundings.

But if we fall into inferiority once, we could not easy to overcome it.

>> But if we fall into inferiority once, we could not easily overcome it.
It\'s because of our feeling.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> It\'s because of our emotion.
When we feel it, we already have a problem in our mind.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> When we give in to the feeling, we automatically have a problem.
If you want to overcome inferiority, you should remove it from your mind.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> If you want to overcome inferiority, you should not think of it.
But it is very difficult to remove inferiority because it deeply places in your mind.

>> [Do you mean]: But it is very difficult to remove inferiority because it is deeply rooted in your mind.
And it is also not shown to you, even if it is your mind.

>> [Do you mean]: It also manifests even if it is just in your mind.

I think it is your fault that you don\'t want to show it from deep your mind.

>> [Do you mean]: I think it is your fault that it still shows even if it is deep in your mind.

So, in many cases if someone have inferiority, he could not easy to overcome it.

>> So in many cases, if someone has inferiority, he could not easily overcome it.
And I also have a little inferiority, but in normal case it isn\'t shown to me.

>> And I also have a little feeling of inferiority, but in normal cases it doesn\'t show.