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In Korea, many people have a lot of stress. They have to work for a long time in their office. Also they have to drink much alcohol with their customer for their office. So many people want to have their rest time. they stay their house all day. Sometimes they go on a picnic with their family but most people stay at home. I think korea people are very poor. In my case, I want to stay at home for relaxation. So I am sorry about that for my daughters. However, during my vacation, I spend time with my family with trip.

Hello [이름]!   That\'s the right way to do this. Keep it up! Some reminders:   1. For is used to indicate the use of something:example: This place is for exhibitions and shows. Used to mean because of:example: I am so happy for you. Used to indicate time or duration:example: He’s been famous for many decades.   2. With is used to indicate being together or being involved:example: I ordered a sandwich with a drink. Used to indicate \"having\":example: I met a guy with green eyes. Used to indicate \"using\":example: I wrote a letter with the pen you gave me. Used to indicate feeling:example: I am emailing you with my sincere apology. Used to indicate agreement or understanding:example: Are you with me?   Teacher Venus^^   In Korea, many people have a lot of stress. >>>CORRECT   They have to work for a long time in their office. >>>CORRECT Also they have to drink much alcohol with their customer for their office. >>>Also they have to drink much alcohol with their customers. So many people want to have their rest time. >>>CORRECT they stay their house all day. >>>They stay in their houses all day. Sometimes they go on a picnic with their family but most people stay at home. >>>CORRECT I think korea people are very poor. >>>I think Korean people are very poor. In my case, I want to stay at home for relaxation. >>>CORRECT So I am sorry about that for my daughters. >>>CORRECT However, during my vacation, I spend time with my family with trip. >>>However during my vacation, I spend time with my family.