4.7 Homework
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Hi there! Good afternoon?
Homework.
For you, What is the ideal marrying age in Korea and why?
I think the ideal marrying age is around 30th years old for man in Korea.
Because they can mostly achieve financial independence at that age in Korea. Of course even if they can't prepare enough money to marry perfectly, I think the most important of life is prosess of living and to be feel enjiyment by themselves.
Thank you!
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Hi there! Good afternoon?>> Correct.Homework.For you, What is the ideal marrying age in Korea and why?I think the ideal marrying age is around 30th years old for man in Korea.
>> I think the ideal marrying age is around 30 years old for Korean men.Because they can mostly achieve financial independence at that age in Korea.
>> Because they are financially independent at that age.
Of course even if they can\'t prepare enough money to marry perfectly,
>> Even if they do not have enough money to have a perfect wedding.
I think the most important of life is prosess of living and to be feel enjiyment by themselves.>> I think the most important is the process of living and how to enjoy life itself.Thank you!
>> Correct.
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