4.7 Homework

2015-04-07 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi Kelly! Good morning! Wow! I drank so much last night. I think I am still drunk. I am going on a business trip to USA next week. It will take for six days. Homework It is very difficult to choose one of those two. I would rather marry someone beautiful with a good personality. If not, I will give up a marriage. I think that I am a lucky guy because my wife is gorgeous woman who has a good personality. so I am happy Thank you!

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Hi Mr [이름]! I hope that you are feeling better now. Have a warm soup.^^ Anyway, thank you for being honest in answering this question. You are indeed lucky because you have a beautiful wife.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi Kelly! Good morning! Wow! I drank so much last night. I think I am still drunk. >> Correct.I am going on a business trip to USA next week. >> I am going on a business trip to the USA next week.  It will take for six days.>> It will take six days.HomeworkIt is very difficult to choose one of those two. >> Correct. I would rather marry someone beautiful with a good personality. >> Correct. If not, I will give up a marriage. >> If not, I will give up my marriage. I think that I am a lucky guy because my wife is gorgeous woman who has a good personality. >> I think that I am a lucky guy because my wife is a gorgeous woman who has a good personality. so I am happy >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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