4/7 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
It was hard for me to chose the kind of my puppy. So I just took a small one.
강사 첨삭
Hello Su [이름],
I hopr you can express yourself more in writing an essay. It will really help you improve your skills in English.
I know that you do have a beautiful heart, that why you are beautiful inside and out.
Have the courage to study English because I know that you can speak the language well.
T. Jeny
It was hard for me to chose the kind of my puppy
>>I was difficult gor me to choose a pet.
So I just took a small one.
>>So, I just chose a puppy.
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