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2017-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I want to be a leader but I am still a follower. Because I am still afriad to be a leader who have to decide a lot of things and many more. Someday, I wil become the leader so I have to prepare it. Don't be afriad.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!
That\'s right. Everything is scary at first but we people are amazing, we can adapt to any kind of environment. I know you can do it. No. You must do it.
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I want to be a leader but I am still a follower.
>> correct!
Because I am still afriad to be a leader who have to decide a lot of things and many more.
>> Because I am still afraid to be a leader who has to decide about a lot of things.
OR>> I am afraid of becoming a leader because many responsibilities are attached to it.
Someday, I wil become the leader so I have to prepare it.
>> Someday, I will become a leader so I have to prepare for it.
Don\'t be afraid.
>> I don\'t have to be afraid.
OR>> I tell myself not to be afraid.

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