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학생이 쓴 원문
I agree.
Especially, while I travel a new place I feel very good but I miss my home.
So when I come home, I feel very comfortable.
However, after some days I want to travel another new place.
강사 첨삭
Hi there Ms. [이름]!
There\'s no place like home but it\'s fun to visit new places from time to time, right? I hope you\'ll be able to go on a family trip this coming summer season. Let\'s pray for that!
Take care!
~T. Lynn
I agree.
>> correct!
Especially, while I travel a new place I feel very good but I miss my home.
>> correct!
OR>> Especially when I go travelling, I feel happy but I miss home.
So when I come home, I feel very comfortable.
>> correct!
However, after some days I want to travel another new place.
>> correct!
OR>> However after a days, I want to go traveling to another place.
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