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2017-05-12 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

I watched TV about daily schedule of a new president in my country. Many people want to him a lot of things. But in my opinion, waitting is important for him and us. I believe him and we have to believe him because he is the president in my country now. Believing will be his power which is our power.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Ms. [이름]!(\",)

I think you are right. Majority of you voted for the president thus you should trust him that he will lead the country to a better Korea.

Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn

I watched TV about daily schedule of a new president in my country.

>> I watched on TV about the daily schedule of a new president in my country.
Many people want to him a lot of things.

>> Many people want him to do a lot of things.
But in my opinion, waitting is important for him and for us.

>> correct!
I believe him and we have to believe him because he is the president in my country now.

>> correct!

OR>> We have to believe in him because he is our president now.
Believing will be his power which is our power.

>> Believing will be his power which is our power too.

OR>> If we believe and trust in him, this will strengthen him to lead us/our country.

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