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Hello Ms. [이름]!
I think whatever you choose between these two, it\'s up to you as long as you know how to manage your time at work and
with your family right? Nice to hear your voice again this Monday Ms. [이름]. ^^
Don\'t be upset because it\'s Monday, always have the reason to smile.^^
~Teacher Rain~
I think it is a good choose that a lower-paying job with shorter hours because I can spend enjoyable time with my family.
>> I think lower paying job with shorter hour is a good choice, because I can spend enjoyable time with my family.
But I will choose that a high-paying job with long hours because I have to save much money for my family\'s future.
>> But I will choose a high paying job with longer hour, because I have to save much money for my family\'s future.
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