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학생이 쓴 원문
1. Korea : He didn't know Korea but He loves Korea now.
2. weather : My favorte weather is [이름] like my name.
3. teacher : When I was young, I wanted be a teacher.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름],
Thank you for sending your homework.
~~ Teacher Kathy
1. Korea : He didn\'t know Korea but He loves Korea now.
>> He didn\'t know much about Korea, but when he went to visit, he started to love the country.
2. weather : My favorte weather is [이름] like my name.
>> My favorite weather is [이름] just like my name.
3. teacher : When I was young, I wanted be a teacher.
3. teacher : When I was young, I wanted be a teacher.
>> Correct!
OR:
>> When I was young, I wanted to become a teacher.
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