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If I can live somewhere, I want to live in New Zealand.
When I watched a movie entitled The Lord of The Rings, the view is fantastic.
Also there are a lot of fresh air and many mountains.
My younger daugher, Chanyoung has very sensitive skin.
That's the reason why I live in New Zealand.
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Ms. [이름],
You\'ve been busy this week so I haven\'t seen your composition for quite some time. Thank you for finishing it today.
Take care!(\",)
~T. Lynn
If I can live somewhere, I want to live in New Zealand.
>> correct!
When I watched a movie entitled \"The Lord of The Rings\", the view is fantastic.
>> correct!
Also there are a lot of fresh air and many mountains.
>> Also there is a lot of fresh air and many mountains.
My younger daughter, Chanyoung has very sensitive skin.
>> correct!
That\'s the reason why I live in New Zealand.
>> That\'s the reason why I want to live in New Zealand.
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