4-7th Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]! ^_^
Thank you very much for writing in our composition board today.
I truly appreciate it.
I also agree that a little knowledge is a very dangerous thing.
In my country, they say that \"empty cans are noisy\".
This expression is a subtle way of saying that people who don\'t know anything are often talkative or noisy.
I also learned that when you are in trouble, it is best to keep quiet rather than to keep talking because talking would only give you more problems.
Anyhow, I hope you are doing great.
I enjoyed reading your essay. :)
See you again on Tuesday.
~Teacher C[이름] ^_^
I agree that a little knowledge is a dangerous thing.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I agree that having limited knowledge is a dangerous thing.
Many people pretend to know all thing if they catch a little thing even if it is very tiny.
>> [Do you mean]: Many people pretend to know all things and they try to correct even the smallest things.
I might understand it since we live in the serious competitive society.
>> I might understand it since we live in a seriously competitive society.
We have to show our forte in the society in order to get more things.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> We need to show our talents to others in order to gain more advantage.
The company that we want to work on wants to hire excellent people, and many applicants also apply.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> The company that we aspire to work for wants to hire exceptional people, and many applicants also apply.
In this case, if we want to get the desirable result, we have to show our forte to the company.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> In this case, if we want to get the desirable result, we have to show our expertise to the company.
In normal cases, when we are talking about something with our friends, we intend to show our knowledge to others.
>> In normal cases, when we are talking about something with our friends, we tend to show our knowledge to others.
At that time, we pretend to know all thing even if it is a little.
>> At that time, we pretend to know all things even if we only know a little.
But it is not dangerous as previous said.
>> But it is not as dangerous as what we have previous said.
In the company, someone works on the project and sometimes he would face to a difficult situation.
>> In the company, when an employee works on a project, he sometimes has to face a difficult situation.
In this case, if he acts like a profess who could solve anything, he would end up in a fail.
>> In this case, if he acts like a professional who could solve anything, he would end up failing.
I think it is a dangerous thing and the best way to do something is to discuss with each other.
>> CORRECT!
OR >> I think it is a dangerous matter and the best way to do something is to discuss things with each other.
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