4.8 Homework

2014-04-08 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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Hi ma'am! Good afternoon? I just got a lunch. It was good. How was your lunch? Is it lunch time in Phillipines now? Have a good time. Homework What is your artistic ability? Well, I think the Men was born having an ability to make everything.We just can not find out our potential ability. When I was kid, I used to break some watches because of my curiosity. So I entered university as a engineering major. I think I have several artistic abilities and I can do that. Above all, my artistic ability is composition. I like it very much. Thank you!

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Hello there, Mr. [이름]! I\'m glad that you had lunch already. Although it is already lunchtime here in the Philippines, I am going to have mine after work. Anyway, thank you for sharing your artistic abilities. Your curiousity helped you enhaced your skills. Keep on delevoping further your skills and talents. Have a great afternoon! ~KELLY~ Hi ma\'am! Good afternoon?>> Correct.I just got a lunch. >> Correct.>> OR: I just had my lunch. It was good. How was your lunch? >> Correct. Is it lunch time in Phillipines now? >> Is it lunch time in the Phillipines now? Have a good time. >> Correct.HomeworkWhat is your artistic ability?Well, I think the Men was born having an ability to make everything. >>Well, I think thta men were born to have an ability to make everything. We just can not find out our potential ability. >> But we are not aware of our potential ability. When I was kid, I used to break some watches because of my curiosity. >> When I was a kid, I used to break some watches because of my curiosity. So I entered university as a engineering major. >> So when I entered the university, I took up Engineering as my major. I think I have several artistic abilities and I can do that. >> I think I have several artistic abilities. Above all, my artistic ability is composition. >> Above all, my artistic ability is writing a composition.I like it very much. >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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