4/8 HOMEWORK

2018-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 May

학생이 쓴 원문

Korea has three types of family. The first type is a great family. It's lives with grandparents. The second types is a small family. This is an general family. Last, type is one person family. This is making a lot nowadays. They live single life.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon Sir Jai Woo! Thanks for doing your homework.

Thank you also for sharing about types of family in Korea.

Please take time to read the corrections especially the terms that I used in the sentences.

See you tomorrow! ^^

~~Teacher May~~

Korea has three types of family.

>> CORRECT 
The first type is a great family.

>> The first type is extended family.
It\'s lives with grandparents.

>> It consists of parents, children, and grandparents.
The second types is a small family.

>> The second type is nuclear family. 

This is an general family.

>> This is very common and a traditional type of family structure.
Last, type is one person family.

>> The last type is single parent family.
This is making a lot nowadays.

>> It usually happens nowadays.

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