4/8 homework
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[Describe the world 100 years from now. Describe how people live, and new inventions and also the things that will not change.]
Now, many high-technology is developing very quickly and the world is changing so rapidly.
One of my expectation is an automatic driving system in a car.
I know someone is using that now.
But, we still have an unstable problem, and many accidents have occurred.
It will be stable soon.
On the other hand, I can not make sure that the human will survive after 100 years on the earth.
The earth is getting sick due to global warming and many environmental problems.
Now many researchers say we should find a new planet to live human.
On the development of high-technology, we can not reduce energy consumption.
The quantity consumed will increase, but, it means the earth\' life decrease.
Nowadays, I often think that it\'s important to live hard for today, tomorrow may not come.... hahaha.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^ ^ Thank you for spending time with your homework. I really appreciate it! ^ ^
Thank you for your thoughts on this one. You really gave me something to think about! ^ ^ We must enjoy life, savor every moment and be happy that the air we breathe is still okay. Who knows what may happen in the future. With the fast developing technology, humans are making the Earth and it\'s resources suffer. Too bad for our future generations. -_-
-Teacher Jedah
Now, many high-technology is developing very quickly and the world is changing so rapidly.
>>Correct
One of my expectation is an automatic driving system in a car.
One of my expectation is an automatic driving system in a car.
>>Correct
I know someone is using that now.
I know someone is using that now.
>>Correct
But, we still have an unstable problem, and many accidents have occurred.
But, we still have an unstable problem, and many accidents have occurred.
>>Correct
It will be stable soon.
It will be stable soon.
>>Correct or
>>I can foresee that it will become stable soon.
On the other hand, I can not make sure that the human will survive after 100 years on the earth.
On the other hand, I can not make sure that the human will survive after 100 years on the earth.
>>Correct
The earth is getting sick due to global warming and many environmental problems.
The earth is getting sick due to global warming and many environmental problems.
>>Correct
Now many researchers say we should find a new planet to live human.
Now many researchers say we should find a new planet to live human.
>>Now many researchers say we should find a new planet to live and for humans to thrive.
On the development of high-technology, we can not reduce energy consumption.
On the development of high-technology, we can not reduce energy consumption.
>>Correct
The quantity consumed will increase, but, it means the earth\' life decrease.
The quantity consumed will increase, but, it means the earth\' life decrease.
>>The quantity consumed will increase, but, it means the earth\'s life decreases.
Nowadays, I often think that it\'s important to live hard for today, tomorrow may not come.... hahaha.
Nowadays, I often think that it\'s important to live hard for today, tomorrow may not come.... hahaha.
>>Correct or
>>I often think that we must live our life to the fullest everyday, because tomorrow may not come!
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