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In the situation, unfortunately, I think we should choose a better person.
We should prevent becoming the worst city or country from the incompetent government or politicians.
Election is an individual right.
Abstaining is like giving up on my society.
We are social members.
Sometimes we feel government or politics is very far from me, because I am not a politician and I am not participating in politics.
However, I believe that politicians should be volunteers for the public, not privileges.
So, they have to know how strong public opinion and power and they should be afraid of it.
For that, the public must always monitor politics and perceive the situation.
And the chance to show it is the election.
I think the conflict between various parties is very positive to be a good government.
We can pursue and find something better during the conflict.
I don\'t know politics very well, but I am trying to know more.
It is very important, and it makes the government can not ignore the public.
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Hi [이름],
Welcome back to the homework world! I missed reading your homework, so thanks for this one:)
-Rachel
In the situation, unfortunately, I think we should choose a better person.
>> correct
>> In this person, I think we should choose the lesser evil one.
We should prevent becoming the worst city or country from the incompetent government or politicians.
We should prevent becoming the worst city or country from the incompetent government or politicians.
>> correct
Election is an individual right. Abstaining is like giving up on my society. We are social members.
Election is an individual right. Abstaining is like giving up on my society. We are social members.
>> correct (awesome sentences)
Sometimes I feel government or politics is very far from me, because I am not a politician and I am not participating in politics.
Sometimes I feel government or politics is very far from me, because I am not a politician and I am not participating in politics.
>> correct
However, I believe that politicians should be volunteers for the public, not privileges.
However, I believe that politicians should be volunteers for the public, not privileges.
>> correct
>>However, I believe politicians should serve the public interest and not think of their privileges.
So, they have to know how strong public opinion and power are, and they should be afraid of it.
So, they have to know how strong public opinion and power are, and they should be afraid of it.
>> correct (just add are after public opinion and power)
For that, the public must always monitor politics and perceive the situation.
For that, the public must always monitor politics and perceive the situation.
>> correct
And the chance to show it is the election.
And the chance to show it is the election.
>> correct
I think the conflict between various parties is very positive to be a good government.
I think the conflict between various parties is very positive to be a good government.
>> correct
We can pursue and find something better during the conflict.
We can pursue and find something better during the conflict.
>> correct
I don\'t know politics very well, but I am trying to know more. It is very important, and it makes the government not ignore the public.
I don\'t know politics very well, but I am trying to know more. It is very important, and it makes the government not ignore the public.
>> correct (just remove can after not)
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