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2011-10-25 · 첨삭 강사 Tess

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And I worked as an English academy teacher. Honestly, at this moment I could not speak in English at all. As a teacher I had to study more in English for them as well as me. In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with my foreign friend who happens to be my younger brother’s personal teacher. From that on, I eventually improved my speaking skills and learned how to deal with other people. Teaching was a rewarding job because I've got experience as much as I gave. And I realized that whenever I help someone I always feel the value given, even to little things like plants and flowers.

강사 첨삭

continuation... And I worked as an English academy teacher.>> correctHonestly, at this moment I could not speak in English at all. >> correctAs a teacher I had to study more in English for them as well as me.>>As a teacher, I had to study more in English for them. In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with my foreign friend who happens to be my younger brother’s personal teacher. >>In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with my foreign friend who happens to be my younger brother's personal teacher. From that on, I eventually improved my speaking skills and learned how to deal with other people. >> correct Teaching was a rewarding job because I've got experience as much as I gave. >>Teaching was a rewarding job because I got to learn as much as I teach.And I realized that whenever I help someone I always feel the value given, even to little things like plants and flowers. >> correct

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