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And I worked as an English academy teacher.
Honestly, at this moment I could not speak in English at all.
As a teacher I had to study more in English for them as well as me.
In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with my foreign friend who happens to be my younger brother’s personal teacher. From that on, I eventually improved my speaking skills and learned how to deal with other people. Teaching was a rewarding job because I've got experience as much as I gave.
And I realized that whenever I help someone I always feel the value given, even to little things like plants and flowers.
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And I worked as an English academy teacher.>> correctHonestly, at this moment I could not speak in English at all. >> correctAs a teacher I had to study more in English for them as well as me.>>As a teacher, I had to study more in English for them.
In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with my foreign friend who happens to be my younger brother’s personal teacher.
>>In addition, Despite of my bad english skills I tried to have a close relationship with my foreign friend who happens to be my younger brother's personal teacher.
From that on, I eventually improved my speaking skills and learned how to deal with other people.
>> correct
Teaching was a rewarding job because I've got experience as much as I gave.
>>Teaching was a rewarding job because I got to learn as much as I teach.And I realized that whenever I help someone I always feel the value given, even to little things like plants and flowers.
>> correct
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