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학생이 쓴 원문
I hope my children admire me but it is difficult..I know.
Most children don\'t admire their parents.
I am trying for myself and my children.
In the future.. when my children become adult, maybe they will be able to admire me.
강사 첨삭
I hope my children admire me but it is difficult..I know.
>> Correct
or
>> I hope my children admire me but I know it\'s difficult.
Most children don\'t admire their parents.
>> Correct
I am trying for myself and my children.
>> I am trying my best for myself and my children.
In the future.. when my children become adult, maybe they will be able to admire me.
>> Correct
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