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I bought my plane ticket last month for Japan.
I really want to visit there so when I bought the ticket, I was really happy.
However, something terrible happened.
Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize.
I have to go on a business trip that day.
If it's possible, I want you to refund it.
Can you refund it?
If it's impossible, I want you to refund half of the price.
Can you refund half of the price?
I see that it's very difficult.
However, the tickets' cost is very high.
I am very poor.
Please call me back after checking.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Wow! You got almost perfect. Some reminders:
\'Buy a ticket to + name of a place\' is the correct expression.
example: I bought a plane ticket to Japan last month.
Teacher Venus^^
I bought my plane ticket last month for Japan.
>>>I bought a plane ticket to Japan last month.
I really want to visit there so when I bought the ticket, I was really happy.
>>>CORRECT
However, something terrible happened.
>>>CORRECT
Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize.
>>>CORRECT
I have to go on a business trip that day.
>>>CORRECT
If it\'s possible, I want you to refund it.
>>>CORRECT
Can you refund it?
>>>CORRECT
If it\'s impossible, I want you to refund half of the price.
>>>CORRECT
Can you refund half of the price?
>>>CORRECT
I see that it\'s very difficult.
>>>CORRECT
However, the tickets\' cost is very high.
>>>However, the ticket\'s cost is very high.
I am very poor.
>>>CORRECT
Please call me back after checking.
>>>CORRECT
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