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2016-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

I bought my plane ticket last month for Japan. I really want to visit there so when I bought the ticket, I was really happy. However, something terrible happened. Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize. I have to go on a business trip that day. If it's possible, I want you to refund it. Can you refund it? If it's impossible, I want you to refund half of the price. Can you refund half of the price? I see that it's very difficult. However, the tickets' cost is very high. I am very poor. Please call me back after checking.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Wow! You got almost perfect. Some reminders: \'Buy a ticket to + name of a place\' is the correct expression. example: I bought a plane ticket to Japan last month.   Teacher Venus^^   I bought my plane ticket last month for Japan. >>>I bought a plane ticket to Japan last month. I really want to visit there so when I bought the ticket, I was really happy. >>>CORRECT However, something terrible happened. >>>CORRECT Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize. >>>CORRECT I have to go on a business trip that day. >>>CORRECT If it\'s possible, I want you to refund it. >>>CORRECT Can you refund it? >>>CORRECT If it\'s impossible, I want you to refund half of the price. >>>CORRECT Can you refund half of the price? >>>CORRECT I see that it\'s very difficult. >>>CORRECT However, the tickets\' cost is very high. >>>However, the ticket\'s cost is very high. I am very poor. >>>CORRECT Please call me back after checking. >>>CORRECT

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