4/9 home work

2015-04-13 · 첨삭 강사 Jeny

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I bought some mangoes yesterday which were very sweet. 2. Being the weather fine, we went out for a walk. 3. It is too hot to go out now. 4. If peter did not work hard, he would fail the test. 5. Both the students are intelligent as well as.

강사 첨삭

Hello Su [이름], There were some mistakes but don\'t let those mistakes conquer your strength. I hope that you will still continue to develop this way. You can learn from this process. ^.^ Just keep it up!! T. Jeny     1. I bought some mangoes yesterday which were very sweet. >>The mangoes which I bought yesterday were very sweet.2. Being the weather fine, we went out for a walk. >> The weather being fine, we went out for a walk.3. It is too hot to go out now. >>correct4. If peter did not work hard, he would fail the test. >>If Peter worked hard, he would not fail the test.5. Both the students are intelligent as well as. >>Both the students are intelligent as well as good.

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