4.9 Homework
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi ma'am! Good morning? Today is a middle of this week.Time flies so fast. I am excited because I have a good plan comming weekend. That is secret...
Homework
How would you feel if someone broke his promise to you?
If someone broke his promise to me, I will be in a bad mood. Basically I always keep my promise very well. If we would like to work to achieve the goal with someone, we need minimum amount of trust and confidence. If we don't have a private appointment, we will not improve ourselves and this is the reason why keeping our promise is very important for us.
Thank you! Have a nice day kelly!
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [이름]! I think you have an exciting plan for the weekend that is why you can\'t wait anymore. Whatever that is, I hope that you are going to enjoy it. Have a fun day!
~KELLY~
Hi ma\'am! Good morning?
>> Correct.
Today is a middle of this week.
>> Today is the middle of this week.
Time flies so fast.
>> Correct.
I am excited because I have a good plan comming weekend.
>> I am excited because I have a good plan this coming weekend.
That is secret...
>> That is a secret...HomeworkHow would you feel if someone broke his promise to you?If someone broke his promise to me, I will be in a bad mood.
>> Correct.
Basically I always keep my promise very well.
>> Correct.
If we would like to work to achieve the goal with someone, we need minimum amount of trust and confidence.
>> If we would like to work with someone in achieving a goal, we need a minimum amount of trust and confidence.
If we don\'t have a private appointment, we will not improve ourselves and this is the reason why keeping our promise is very important for us.>> If we don\'t socialize with other people, we will not imporove ourselves and that is the reason why keeping a promise is very important for us.Thank you! Have a nice day kelly!
>> Correct.
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