4.9 Homework

2015-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

학생이 쓴 원문

Hi there! It's so late to submit today's homework. I had a meeting all the morning. I think that speaking foreign languages skill is very important in order to be successful in the world today. Those people who can speak foreign languages fluently will have more opportunities than others. so I try to study hard learning English every day even though I am an old guy. My business trip to the USA this time was canceled. I think that it's due to my poor English skill. I promise to study hard more and more from now on. I am stressed out about speaking English. Please help me! Thank you!

강사 첨삭

Good morning Mr. [이름]! I\'m sorry to that your business trip was canceled. I hope that it will motivate you to study harder and improve your skills. I know that you have the potential to become a good English speaker because you are very diligent. Just don\'t stop. Instead, you have to develop your skills further. I am here to help you.^^ ~Kelly^^ Hi there! >> Correct. It\'s so late to submit today\'s homework. >> I submitted my homework late today. I had a meeting all the morning.>> I had a meeting all morning.I think that speaking foreign languages skill is very important in order to be successful in the world today. >> I think to speaking foreign languages is very important in order to be successful in the world today. Those people who can speak foreign languages fluently will have more opportunities than others. >> Correct. So I try to study hard learning English every day even though I am an old guy. >> So, everyday,I try to study harder in learning English even though I am an old guy. My business trip to the USA this time was canceled. >> My business trip to the USA was canceled. I think that it\'s due to my poor English skill. >> Correct. I promise to study hard more and more from now on. >> Correct. I am stressed out about speaking English. >> Correct. Please help me! >> Correct.Thank you! >> Correct.

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