4.9 homework^^
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I can see your willingness to learn [이름] ^-^
Make it a habit to study everyday.
Keep up the good work!!
Question)
Do you feel sorry for people who live on the street?
Answer)
I think they are not poor.
Maybe they got lazy or swindled and so poor. But they have not willingness of life .
So they were run thorugh his fortune so live on the street.
This willingness is effort for get jobs and get for live.
If they have willingness of life, they will not to live out of on the street.
The willingness of life is very important which irrespective of the circumstances.
I think they are not poor. Maybe they got lazy or swindled and so poor. But they don\'t have the willingness of life. So they were run through his fortune to live on the street. This willingness is the effort to get jobs and get to live. If they have the willingness to life, they will not live out on the street. The willingness of life is very important which is irrespective of the circumstances.
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