4/9 homework
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[Write about something you regret having done. Point out what could have happened if you had not made that decision.]
I got a Ph.D. at Inha University in Incheon which I graduated for B.S, M.S, and Ph.D.
I was very familiar with my school, and I didn\\\'t think about go abroad for studying doctor course.
But now, sometimes I think if I went abroad and took time a few years, maybe my life will be so much changed from now.
There are both advantages and disadvantages.
But, sometimes I wonder the different future.
I think all choice has both advantages and disadvantages or benefit and risk.
Once I choose a way, we should accept the situation and concentrate and grow the advantage to make a better future.
I don\\\'t know if I could choose the better choice or future.
But, I learn from my regrets, and it will make me decide better in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for investing your time in doing your homework. I appreciate it a lot! ^ ^
Thank you for sharing about your past. Opportunity comes once in a lifetime. So given the chance, we must grab all the opportunities there are especially when it\'s all about our future! And making the right decisions is an advantage.^ ^
-Teacher Jedah
I got a Ph.D. at Inha University in Incheon which I graduated for B.S, M.S, and Ph.D.
>>I had my Bachelors Degree and Masters Degree at Inha University in Incheon and took my Ph. Degree there as well.
I was very familiar with my school, and I didn\\\'t think about go abroad for studying doctor course.
I was very familiar with my school, and I didn\\\'t think about go abroad for studying doctor course.
>>I was very familiar with my school, and I didn\'t think about going abroad to take up my Doctorate degree.
But now, sometimes I think if I went abroad and took time a few years, maybe my life will be so much changed from now.
But now, sometimes I think if I went abroad and took time a few years, maybe my life will be so much changed from now.
>>But now, sometimes if I look back and have considered studying abroad, my life would have been different than now.
There are both advantages and disadvantages.
There are both advantages and disadvantages.
>>Correct
But, sometimes I wonder the different future.
But, sometimes I wonder the different future.
>>But sometimes, I wonder what difference would it make for my future.
I think all choice has both advantages and disadvantages or benefit and risk.
>>I think all choices have their advantages and disadvantages or benefits and risks.
Once I choose a way, we should accept the situation and concentrate and grow the advantage to make a better future.
Once I choose a way, we should accept the situation and concentrate and grow the advantage to make a better future.
>>Once we have decided on what to choose, we should accept the situation and concentrate on how to make it work to have a better future.
I don\\\'t know if I could choose the better choice or future.
I don\\\'t know if I could choose the better choice or future.
>>I don\'t know if I can make good choices for my future.
But, I learn from my regrets, and it will make me decide better in the future.
But, I learn from my regrets, and it will make me decide better in the future.
>>But, I learned from the past, and I guess it will make me decide better in the future.
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