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It is difficult to find someone with normal weight from lots of media.
Peaple are vulnerable on environment, they can be easily affected by media and start thinking that silm body line is ideal.
Some are too strict to themselves, even they get eating disorder. In few cases, some lost their life because of extrem diet and serious eating disorder.
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It is difficult to find someone with normal weight from lots of media.
>>Correct
Peaple are vulnerable on environment, they can be easily affected by media and start thinking that silm body line is ideal.
Peaple are vulnerable on environment, they can be easily affected by media and start thinking that silm body line is ideal.
>>People ae vulnerable toward their environment, they can easily be affected by the media and they start thinking that having a slimmer body is ideal.
Some are too strict to themselves, even they get eating disorder.
Some are too strict to themselves, even they get eating disorder.
>>Some are too strict on themselves that they develop eating disorders.
In few cases, some lost their life because of extrem diet and serious eating disorder.
>>In a few cases, some lost their lives because of extreme diet and serious eating disorder.
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