4-9th Homework

Hi, [이름]! ^_^
It\'s Friday again. Hooray! kkk. 

Thank you for taking the time to give your answer in our essay question.  

I agree when you said that we all define success differently.

What\'s great or perfect for me might not be great or perfect for you.

In my opinion, success means achieving and using your full potential in life and being able to share this potential to others.

Anyhow, this is just my opinion.

I hope you\'re doing great.

See you next week.

~Teacher C[이름] ^_^

I think that success is depended on what do you think about it.

>> I think success depends on what you think about it.

OR >> I think success is a state of mind.
Someones would think as success when all that they want to achieve become perfect.

>> [Do you mean]: To some people, success is when they perfectly achieve all that they want.
Someones would think as success even if it is not perfect but they satisfied with their efforts.

>> [Do you mean]: To some people, success is when they give effort even if the outcome is not perfect.
And there would be a standard as a symbol of success, for example, money, honor and power.

>> And there would be a standard as a symbol of success; for example, money, honor and power.
So, when we consider about success, the things that many people think about would be various.

>> So, when we consider about success, the things that many people think of as symbols of success would be various.
Since the criteria differs from each other, it\'s because they have a different idea, the degree of success would be various.

>> The criteria differ from each other because they have a different idea and therefore, the degree of success would be various.
When we start to do with something which we could not deal before, our first demand is learn to how to use it.

>> When we start to do something which we could not deal with before, our first demand is to learn how to do it.
Afterwards, we want to be a professional on the site.

>> [Do you mean]: Afterwards, we want to be a professional in this field.
It\'s because we might not satisfy with it.

>> It\'s because we might not be satisfied with it.
Human society has developed to achieve the requirement that many people want.

>> CORRECT!

OR >> Human society has developed to achieve the requirement that many people are aiming for.
Anyway, there is no way to satisfy with human\'s desire, it\'s because it is endless.

>> Anyway, there is no way to satisfy a human\'s desire because it is endless.
Desire would become often a greedy, it would be a challenge.

>> [Do you mean]: The desire to not become a greedy person is a challenge.