4 classes

2010-12-20 · 첨삭 강사 RJ

학생이 쓴 원문

From today, we have only 4 classes yepee!! Until last week we had 6 classes ( mon, tue, thu, fri ), 4 classes ( wed, sat ). So, I can play a lot. Today I played a hour playing soccer with my friends. Most of my friends played because we have only 4classes. However, we have no Physical Education class because P.E. class is in the 6th hour. But, It doesn't matter because I can do P.E. after school. How lucky I am!!

강사 첨삭

Hi Joey,

Like they say, "All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy." Make the most out of your free time nowadays.Hey, Christmas is this Saturday, do you have any plans with your family? Talk to you later.

-RJ

From today, we have only 4 classes yepee!!
>>correct
Until last week we had 6 classes ( mon, tue, thu, fri ), 4 classes ( wed, sat ).
>>Until last week we had 6 classes ( mon, tue, thu, fri ), and 4 classes ( wed, sat ).
So, I can play a lot.
>>correct
Today I played a hour playing soccer with my friends.
>>Today I spent an hour playing soccer with my friends.
Most of my friends played because we have only 4classes.
>>Most of my friends played because we have only 4 classes.
However, we have no Physical Education class because P.E. class is in the 6th hour.
>>correct
But, It doesn't matter because I can do P.E. after school.
>>correct
How lucky I am!!

>>correct

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