4. Relationship with JBC & ISPULS
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After Representive director chagned last year, their attitued has chagned to us.
>> After the Representive Director was chagned last year, their attitude has changed towards us.
Previous representive director would like to push us strongly as local style.
>> The previous Representive Director would like to push us strongly for local style.
At that times, Michelle and I had a hard time from their control.
>> At that time, Michelle and I had a hard time from their control.
So Michelle has a regret and feel inconvenience.
>> So Michelle had regrets and felt inconvenient.
She setted our company and got over a difficulty as member of beginning.
>> She set our company and got over difficulties as a member of a new beginning.
5.My thinking of Turner
>> What I think about Turner
I like Turner's ideas and style, values.
>> Correct!
I was premoted to manager this year.
>> I was promoted as a manager this year.
So i want to grow with Turner in the near future.
>> So I want to grow with Turner in the near future.
If there is a chance to work other region, I want work there.
>> If there is a chance to work in other regions, I want to work there.
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