4. some of conversation

2010-07-02 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

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M: Yes you right. How about this, when I after drink about some bottle of beer then I can better hear the documentary movie then ordinary state. But the problem is I can’t remember the whole contents. H: If you want, I can rent my ears. Do you want? M: Sure. I want. Just 1 piece is enough. I really appreciate your kindness. ** end ^^ ** are you enjoying of story? by the way this board is so small.

강사 첨삭

M: Yes you right. How about this, when I after drink about some bottle of beer then I can better hear the documentary movie then ordinary state. But the problem is I can’t remember the whole contents. >> M: Yes, you are right. Sometimes I drink a bottle of beer prior to watching a documentary movie, but it also gives me a dilemma because I can’t remember the whole contents. H: If you want, I can rent my ears. Do you want? >> H: If you want , I can lend you my ears?M: Sure. I want. Just 1 piece is enough. I really appreciate your kindness. >> M: Sure, I would love that, I ear is enough, I really appreciate your kindness.. ** end ^^ **are you enjoying of story? by the way this board is so small. >> Did you enjoy the story? >> Yes it is I apologize, nice story- it’s funny.

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