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When I was young, I used to set the table before dinner. I tried to help my mother by doing chores. My mother wanted to teach how to cook but I didn't want it. Now, I don't like to cook but I like to clean house more than cooking. My eldest sister like to cook so she cook some food very well. After finishing my chores, I felt good.

    Hello [이름]!   You are getting better.  Some reminders: 1. Parallel structures include word or phrase patterns that are similar. When ideas in a sentence or paragraph are similar, you can reinforce these similarities in meaning by creating parallel structures. Effective parallelism creates symmetry in sentences and adds force to your writing; it emphasizes the likeness between two or more ideas. example: I like cleaning the house more than cooking.   2. Basic Principle: Singular subjects need singular verbs; plural subjects need plural verbs. example: My eldest sister likes to cook so she cooks some food very well.   Teacher Venus^^   When I was young, I used to set the table before dinner. >>>CORRECT I tried to help my mother by doing chores. >>>CORRECTMy mother wanted to teach how to cook but I didn\'t want it. >>>CORRECTNow, I don\'t like to cook but I like to clean house more than cooking. >>>Now, I don\'t like to cook but I like cleaning the house more than cooking.   My eldest sister like to cook so she cook some food very well. >>>My eldest sister likes to cook so she cooks some food very well. After finishing my chores, I felt good. >>>CORRECT