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학생이 쓴 원문
I want my children to do English very well.
Also when my children want to know about English, I want to give the answer to them.
So I decided that I would study English for them because when I was young I didn't study English.
That is reason why I study Enlish.
I am studying English speaking, reading and writing for them.
That's way to help my children.
I hope that my children and I talk about a lot of things with English.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You wrote good sentences. I\'d like to explain about collocations. A collocation is two or more words that often go together. These combinations just sound \"right\" to native English speakers, who use them all the time. On the other hand, other combinations may be unnatural and just sound \"wrong\".
examples: do English (sounds wrong)
speak English (correct)
Teacher Venus^^
I want my children to do English very well.
>>>I want my children to speak English very well.
Also when my children want to know about English, I want to give the answer to them.
>>>CORRECT
So I decided that I would study English for them because when I was young I didn\'t study English.
>>>CORRECT
That is reason why I study Enlish.
>>>That is the reason why I study English.
I am studying English speaking, reading and writing for them.
>>>CORRECT
That\'s way to help my children.
>>>That\'s the way to help my children.
I hope that my children and I talk about a lot of things with English.
>>>CORRECT
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