41. Homework
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Good morning, Jason^^
Thank you very much for doing your homework, and I hope, someday, you will meet someone who will change your mindset, ha! ha!
I don’t know the connection among these three examples.
>>CORRECT!
Thus, I just thought about it easily and I choose that freedom is the most important things I like to live freely.
>> Thus, I just thought about it easily and I choose that freedom is the most important thing I like to live freely.
And then as you know, that’s why I had quieted from a previous job before I have been to the Philippines for studying English.
>>And then as you know, I had quit my previous job before going to the Philippines to study English.
While I was in Baguio and Cebu City, I most of the times worn cool pants which looks simple and comfortable.
>> While I was in Baguio and Cebu City, most of the time I wore cool pants which looked simple and comfortable.
And some of students liked to wear freely as me, therefore Jack and few students whom is Taiwanese, who I have met in Cebu, asked me how to buy those and I went to night market with them buying the things with special patterns.
>>And some of students like to wear freely as me, therefore, Jack and a few Taiwanese students whom I have met in Cebu, asked me how to buy those and I went to night market with them buying the things with special patterns.
Moreover, I choose this company that I work now because I want to enjoy an isolated life between work and freedom.
>> Moreover, I choose this company that I work for now because I want to enjoy an isolated life between work and freedom.
Hence, after finishing work, I go to swim, study getting a license of firefighting equipment especially electrical engineering, or watch discussion programs owing to the fact that it is my dilettante life.
>> Hence, after finishing work, I swim, study to get a license of firefighting equipment especially electrical engineering, or watch discussion programs owing to the fact that it is my dilettante life.
Additionally, I don’t want to get married due to the freedom.
>>CORRECT!
If I get married with a girl and having babies, I have to live for them since I get a lot of responsibilities to take care of them.
>>If I get married to a woman and have babies, I have to live for them since I get a lot of responsibilities to take care of them.
But, sadly, I don’t need to think regarding of marriage because of the fact that I don’t have even a girlfriend.
>> But, sadly, I don’t need to think about marriage because of the fact that I don’t even have a girlfriend.
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