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2015-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Many women want to be a beautiful woman like the actress in Korean. So after watching TV, they search on the internet about the actress' style. Of course, I want to be like the actress. So when I visit the beauty salon, I change my hair style. However after changing my hair style, I am always sad. I can't be like a beautiful actress despite changing my hair style. After time, I always make same my mistake.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Don\'t worry if you don\'t look exactly like an actress because you\'re still beautiful in your own way. Let\'s define aftertime. aftertime - The future. A later time. Usage - Often used as in the aftertime.   Teacher Venus^^   Many women want to be a beautiful woman like the actress in Korean. >>>Many women want to be beautiful like a Korean actress. So after watching TV, they search on the internet about the actress\' style. >>>CORRECT Of course, I want to be like the actress. >>>Of course, I want to be like an actress. So when I visit the beauty salon, I change my hair style. >>>CORRECT However after changing my hair style, I am always sad. >>>CORRECT I can\'t be like a beautiful actress despite changing my hair style. >>>CORRECT After time, I always make same my mistake. >>>I always make the same mistake.

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