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Many women want to be a beautiful woman like the actress in Korean.
So after watching TV, they search on the internet about the actress' style.
Of course, I want to be like the actress.
So when I visit the beauty salon, I change my hair style.
However after changing my hair style, I am always sad.
I can't be like a beautiful actress despite changing my hair style.
After time, I always make same my mistake.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Don\'t worry if you don\'t look exactly like an actress because you\'re still beautiful in your own way. Let\'s define aftertime.
aftertime
- The future. A later time.
Usage
- Often used as in the aftertime.
Teacher Venus^^
Many women want to be a beautiful woman like the actress in Korean.
>>>Many women want to be beautiful like a Korean actress.
So after watching TV, they search on the internet about the actress\' style.
>>>CORRECT
Of course, I want to be like the actress.
>>>Of course, I want to be like an actress.
So when I visit the beauty salon, I change my hair style.
>>>CORRECT
However after changing my hair style, I am always sad.
>>>CORRECT
I can\'t be like a beautiful actress despite changing my hair style.
>>>CORRECT
After time, I always make same my mistake.
>>>I always make the same mistake.
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