43th Homework

2016-04-25 · 첨삭 강사 Charry

학생이 쓴 원문

No, I don't. I will learn from the good points of my hero. If I see the fault of the person that I admire, it would be not admiring him or her eventually. After long time, I could not admire anymore if I find the faults. However, I want to be a positive man. And if I have to learn from others, I will get the good things of him or her. In the world, there are many things to learn and study. And it would be good or bad. Someone said that you have to know all of thing no matter what is good or bad. In other point of view, leaning from the flaws is good for our. If you only know the good thing, you may not recognise the bad thing. In this point of view, both is good to learn. But someone learn the flaws only. It is very serious case. Sometime, I learned the very good habits from my kids. It's a patience of studying. They always do their homework right day. They don't delay theirs. And they studied everyday even though it was a little. And I also do that like them.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]! (^_^) How are you today? I hope you\'re having a great one. Thank you very much for doing your homework. I think we could learn from the mistakes of the people we admire and respect. It\'s because like any other person, they are entitled to commit mistakes because they\'re also human. Nobody is perfect. We could always learn from their experiences whether they\'re good or bad. For as long as they did something to correct their mistakes or improve their flaws then there shouldn\'t be a problem. We could still continue admiring and respecting them because it takes a lot of courage to correct your mistakes and admit that you did something wrong. That\'s all for today [이름]. I\'ll see you again tomorrow. Take care always. ~Teacher C[이름] (^^,) No, I don\'t. >> CORRECT! I will learn from the good points of my hero. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: I usually learn from the good points of my hero. If I see the fault of the person that I admire, it would be not admiring him or her eventually. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: If I see a fault from the person that I admire, my admiration for him/her will eventually fade. After long time, I could not admire anymore if I find the faults. >> Once I find a fault in that person, it\'s difficult for me to admire him/her anymore. However, I want to be a positive man. >> CORRECT! OR >> Howeve, I want to be an optimistic man. And if I have to learn from others, I will get the good things of him or her. >> And if I have to learn from others, I will make sure that I learn/acquire the good things from them. In the world, there are many things to learn and study. >> CORRECT! OR >> There are a lot of things that we need to learn and study in this world. And it would be good or bad. >> They\'re either good or bad. Someone said that you have to know all of thing no matter what is good or bad. >> Someone said that you have to know all things no matter how good or bad they are. In other point of view, leaning from the flaws is good for our. >> In another point-of-view, learning from their flaws is good for us. If you only know the good thing, you may not recognise the bad thing. >> If you only know the good things, you may not recognize the bad things. In this point of view, both is good to learn. >> In this point-of-view, it\'s good to learn both of them. But someone learn the flaws only. >> [DO YOU MEAN]: But some only see the flaws. It is very serious case. >> It is a very serious case. Sometime, I learned the very good habits from my kids. >> Sometimes, I learn very good habits from my kids. It\'s a patience of studying. >> It\'s their patience in studying. They always do their homework right day. >> They always do their homework right away. They don\'t delay theirs. >> CORRECT! OR >> They don\'t delay/procrastinate. And they studied everyday even though it was a little. >> They also study a little everyday. And I also do that like them. >> CORRECT! OR >> I also do it like them.

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