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2015-08-12 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

HI, my name is [이름]. I will visit your town with my friends next week. I heard that your twon will take place a lot of events. When I heard, I was very happy with my friends. However, I don't know about your town. Could you send e_mail about information of your town to me? We want to know about history of your towon with. Before I visit there, my friends and I will study about there. Also, we like events for free. So, ccould you tell me about it? I want to spend enjoyable time with my friends. We need your help.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I appreciate that you still tried answering Lesson 44 even though it\'s difficult for you. Some reminders: 1. Check your spelling. example: town 2. Take place- To happen; occur example: A lot of events will take place in your hometown.   Teacher Venus^^   HI, my name is [이름]. >>>Hi, my name is [이름]. I will visit your town with my friends next week. >>>CORRECT I heard that your twon will take place a lot of events. >>>I heard that your town will have a lot of events. When I heard, I was very happy with my friends. >>>When I heard that, I was very happy with my friends. However, I don\'t know about your town. >>>CORRECT Could you send e_mail about information of your town to me?>>>Could you send an e-mail about your town to me?   We want to know about history of your towon with.>>>We want to know about the history of your town.   Before I visit there, my friends and I will study about there.>>>Before I visit there, my friends and I will research about your place.   Also, we like events for free.>>>Also, we like free events.   So, ccould you tell me about it?>>>So, could you tell me about it?   I want to spend enjoyable time with my friends.>>>I want to spend an enjoyable time with my friends.   We need your help. >>>CORRECT

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