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학생이 쓴 원문
HI, my name is [이름].
I will visit your town with my friends next week.
I heard that your twon will take place a lot of events.
When I heard, I was very happy with my friends.
However, I don't know about your town.
Could you send e_mail about information of your town to me?
We want to know about history of your towon with.
Before I visit there, my friends and I will study about there.
Also, we like events for free.
So, ccould you tell me about it?
I want to spend enjoyable time with my friends.
We need your help.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I appreciate that you still tried answering Lesson 44 even though it\'s difficult for you. Some reminders:
1. Check your spelling.
example: town
2. Take place- To happen; occur
example: A lot of events will take place in your hometown.
Teacher Venus^^
HI, my name is [이름].
>>>Hi, my name is [이름].
I will visit your town with my friends next week.
>>>CORRECT
I heard that your twon will take place a lot of events.
>>>I heard that your town will have a lot of events.
When I heard, I was very happy with my friends.
>>>When I heard that, I was very happy with my friends.
However, I don\'t know about your town.
>>>CORRECT
Could you send e_mail about information of your town to me?>>>Could you send an e-mail about your town to me?
We want to know about history of your towon with.>>>We want to know about the history of your town.
Before I visit there, my friends and I will study about there.>>>Before I visit there, my friends and I will research about your place.
Also, we like events for free.>>>Also, we like free events.
So, ccould you tell me about it?>>>So, could you tell me about it?
I want to spend enjoyable time with my friends.>>>I want to spend an enjoyable time with my friends.
We need your help. >>>CORRECT
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