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2015-10-13 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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Hi, this is [이름]. We are planning to visit the park together. I suggest to go to the park which is located near my apartment. It is a small park but It is very clean. We can ride a bicycle there and we can read a book. My neighbors like going to the park. Sometimes I go on a picnic with my children. After visiting there, you can visit my house in the evening. I wonder about your opinion. After thinking, call my please.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   Thank you for submitting your homework early. An infinitive is never used after suggest. If you use a verb after suggest, the verb must be in the gerund form. The meaning of the sentence is the same as using the subjunctive. example: I suggest going to the park which is located near my apartment.   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT We are planning to visit the park together. >>>CORRECT I suggest to go to the park which is located near my apartment. >>>I suggest going to the park which is located near my apartment. It is a small park but It is very clean. >>>It is a small park but it is very clean. We can ride a bicycle there and we can read a book. >>>CORRECT My neighbors like going to the park. >>>CORRECT Sometimes I go on a picnic with my children. >>>CORRECT After visiting there, you can visit my house in the evening. >>>CORRECT I wonder about your opinion. >>>CORRECT After thinking, call my please. >>>After thinking about it, call me please.

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