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2021-08-23 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름]! ^^

Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

1. CORRECT

2. My father, in the morning, likes to drink milk.

>> OR: My father likes to drink milk in the morning.

3. My classmate, in the summer, likes to drink a smoothie.

>> OR: My classmate likes to smoothies in the summer.

4. My teacher, in the winter, likes to drink coffee.

>> OR: My teacher likes to drink coffee during the winter.

5. My brother, in the afternoon, likes to drink chocolate drink.
>> OR: My brother likes to drink chocolate drinks in the afternoon.

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