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Hi, this is [이름]. Do you have a minute? I had an enjoyable time thanks to you. However, I have a terrible thing. I would like to talk to you about your digital camera. I borrowed it from you last week. Before I tell you about it, I am really sorry. I lost your digital camera because I lost my bag. There was your digital camera. I think that it was stole by someone. I will buy new digital camera for you this weekend. I know you feel upset now. I am so sorry. After I buy it, I will visit your house. See you later.

Hello [이름]!   You are very good at creating a situation. Some reminders: 1. form of “to be” + past participle = passive voice example: I think that it was stolen by someone. 2. Don\'t forget your \'a\'. example: I will buy a new digital camera for you this weekend.   Teacher Venus^^   Hi, this is [이름]. >>>CORRECT Do you have a minute? >>>CORRECTI had an enjoyable time thanks to you. >>>CORRECTHowever, I have a terrible thing. >>>However, something terrible happened.   I would like to talk to you about your digital camera. >>>CORRECTI borrowed it from you last week. >>>CORRECTBefore I tell you about it, I am really sorry. >>>Before I tell you about it, I\'d like to apologize. I lost your digital camera because I lost my bag. >>>CORRECTThere was your digital camera. >>>Your digital camera was inside my bag.I think that it was stole by someone. >>>I think that it was stolen by someone.I will buy new digital camera for you this weekend. >>>I will buy a new digital camera for you this weekend.I know you feel upset now. >>>CORRECTI am so sorry. >>>CORRECTAfter I buy it, I will visit your house. >>>CORRECTSee you later. >>>CORRECT