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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello.
This is [이름].
I heard that your car needs some repairs.
Do you remember?
We are going to visit the part this weekend with your car.
However, we have the problem because of your car.
So I have three solutions.
First, we can take the bus.
It is very cheap but we can't save the time.
Second, we can borrow the car.
It needs some extra money.
Last, we can visit next weekend.
It has to wait for a week.
I really want to go to the park but I want the last solution.
However I want the last solution.
We have no enough money.
So I want to know your opinion.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You are really good at imagining situations. I found out a website that explains about the usage of articles. Check this out:
http://esl.fis.edu/grammar/rules/article.htm
Teacher Venus^^
Hello.
>>>CORRECT
This is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
I heard that your car needs some repairs.
>>>CORRECT
Do you remember?
>>>CORRECT
We are going to visit the part this weekend with your car.
>>>CORRECT
However, we have the problem because of your car.
>>>However, we have a problem because your car needs some repairs.
So I have three solutions.
>>>CORRECT
First, we can take the bus.
>>>CORRECT
It is very cheap but we can\'t save the time.
>>>It is very cheap but we can\'t save time.
Second, we can borrow the car.
>>>Second, we can rent a car.
It needs some extra money.
>>>CORRECT
Last, we can visit next weekend.
>>>CORRECT
It has to wait for a week.
>>>We have to wait for a week.
I really want to go to the park but I want the last solution.
>>>CORRECT
However I want the last solution.
>>>CORRECT
We have no enough money.
>>>We don\'t have enough money.
So I want to know your opinion.
>>>CORRECT
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