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My favorite park is Bukhansan National Park. I have never been there but I heard a lot. It is located near Seoul. So my famous Korean entertainers visit there and they talk about it on the TV. I want to go there but it is located far from my house. I search this park on the internet. It is very beautiful and cheap to enter there. Also it is located the center of many city like island. It is not height so many people like to climb there. I will visit there with my family someday.

Hello [이름]!   You are really diligent. Some reminders: 1. Make use of prepositions correctly. A preposition is used to link noun, pronouns and phrases to other words in a sentence. The word or phrase that the preposition introduces is called the object of the preposition. 2. Height-  is the measurement of vertical distance, but has two meanings in common use. It can either indicate how \"tall\" something is, or how \"high up\" it is. High- of great vertical extent   Teacher Venus^^   My favorite park is Bukhansan National Park. >>>CORRECT I have never been there but I heard a lot. >>>I have never been there but I heard a lot about it. It is located near Seoul. >>>CORRECT So my famous Korean entertainers visit there and they talk about it on the TV.>>>So many famous Korean entertainers visit there and they talk about it on TV.   I want to go there but it is located far from my house.>>>CORRECT   I search this park on the internet.>>>I searched this park on the internet.   It is very beautiful and cheap to enter there.>>>It is very beautiful and it\'s affordable to enter there.   Also it is located the center of many city like island.>>>Also it is located in the center of many cities. It is like an island.   It is not height so many people like to climb there.>>>It is not high so many people like to climb there.   I will visit there with my family someday. >>>CORRECT