47
학생이 쓴 원문
Lesson 47 is for university students.
So, I want to change a situation.
Good afternoon, Mr, Kim.
This is [이름].
I am happy that I can do about a new project with my team members.
I will work it with my team but we don't have many information.
we want to know about information of the project some more.
You asked us marking reports and collecting data.
However, I can't understand something with my team members.
You couldn't explan about the project.
Could you explain the project some more?
Also, I want to know a deadline about the project.
p.s Lesson 47(page 55) is same with page 57 in our test book.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
It\'s great that you thought of another situation. Some reminders:
1. Check your spelling and marks.
examples: explain, Mr.
2. Subject-verb-object pattern
examples: I can do a new project.
I want to know the deadline of the project.3. \'Information\' is uncountable so \'much\' is used.
Teacher Venus^^
Lesson 47 is for university students.
>>>CORRECT
So, I want to change a situation.>>>So, I want to change the situation.
Good afternoon, Mr, Kim.
>>>Good afternoon Mr. [Name].
This is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
I am happy that I can do about a new project with my team members.
>>>I am happy that I can do a new project with my team members.
I will work it with my team but we don\'t have many information.
>>>I will work for it with my team but we don\'t have much information.
we want to know about information of the project some more.
>>>We want to know some more information about the project.
You asked us marking reports and collecting data.
>>>You asked us to mark reports and collect data.
However, I can\'t understand something with my team members.
>>>However, my team members and I can\'t understand something.
You couldn\'t explan about the project.
>>>You couldn\'t explain about the project.
Could you explain the project some more?
>>>CORRECT
Also, I want to know a deadline about the project.
>>>Also, I want to know the deadline of the project.p.s Lesson 47(page 55) is same with page 57 in our test book.
>>>p.s Lesson 47 (page 55) is the same with page 57 in our test book.
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