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2015-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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On the weekend, I sometimes go to the park where is located near the my house. I can see many families there. Many fathers and mothers played with their children. Also there is a small playground. My kids play a hide and seek and many games. Also I can see many old people. They usually exercise. I think many things look good in the park. There are many people activities.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   I\'m proud of the way you worked today. \"That\" is used as the subject or object of a relative clause, especially one defining or restricting the antecedent, sometimes replaceable by who, whom, or which. For more information about relative pronouns check this out: https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/645/01/   Teacher Venus^^   On the weekend, I sometimes go to the park where is located near the my house.>>>On the weekend, I sometimes go to the park that  is located near the my house.   I can see many families there. >>>CORRECT Many fathers and mothers played with their children. >>>CORRECT Also there is a small playground. >>>CORRECT My kids play a hide and seek and many games. >>>My kids play hide and seek and many games. Also I can see many old people. >>>CORRECT They usually exercise. >>>CORRECT I think many things look good in the park. >>>CORRECT There are many people activities. >>>There are many activities for people.

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