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학생이 쓴 원문
On the weekend, I sometimes go to the park where is located near the my house.
I can see many families there.
Many fathers and mothers played with their children.
Also there is a small playground.
My kids play a hide and seek and many games.
Also I can see many old people.
They usually exercise.
I think many things look good in the park.
There are many people activities.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
I\'m proud of the way you worked today. \"That\" is used as the subject or object of a relative clause, especially one defining or restricting the antecedent, sometimes replaceable by who, whom, or which. For more information about relative pronouns check this out:
https://owl.english.purdue.edu/owl/resource/645/01/
Teacher Venus^^
On the weekend, I sometimes go to the park where is located near the my house.>>>On the weekend, I sometimes go to the park that is located near the my house.
I can see many families there.
>>>CORRECT
Many fathers and mothers played with their children.
>>>CORRECT
Also there is a small playground.
>>>CORRECT
My kids play a hide and seek and many games.
>>>My kids play hide and seek and many games.
Also I can see many old people.
>>>CORRECT
They usually exercise.
>>>CORRECT
I think many things look good in the park.
>>>CORRECT
There are many people activities.
>>>There are many activities for people.
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