47. Homework

2018-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Rose

학생이 쓴 원문

Q. Have you ever felt jealous of someone else's success? I don’t know when I felt jealous of someone’s success. I can’t remember about it. So I am just going to write the situations that I got jealous. First, when my friend earned a lot of money from the stocks, I felt jealous to him. Because I thought that he just got money without any effort for earning money. But, actually, he did many things to get an opportunity such as he endured the time when the stocks had decreased and he searched gathering information for the saving stocks when he got free time. Thus, I stopped getting feel jealous to him. Second, when an old brother who worked with me in Malaysia was hired from the big company and bought a car, I felt jealous since he got both that I wanted to have. Actually, he left the previous company giving me few hidden bombs which were kind of problems that gave me a lot of stress. That’s why I got jealous to him. But I stopped getting this kind of feeling to him due to the fact that the job that I work for matches to me and I like it. Anyways, I need to go to bed because I feel too tired today T.T See you tomorrow

강사 첨삭

Thank you very much for this, Jason^^

Don\'t worry, everyone feels jealous, and that is good, as it pushes us to work harder^^

Take a rest, and see you!

Q. Have you ever felt jealous of someone else\'s success?
>>CORRECT!
I don’t know when I felt jealous of someone’s success.

>>CORRECT!

I can’t remember about it.

>>I can’t remember it.
So I am just going to write the situations that I got jealous.
>>I can’t remember it, so I am just going to write the situations that I got jealous.
First, when my friend earned a lot of money from the stocks, I felt jealous to him.

>>First, when my friend earned a lot of money from the stocks, I felt jealous of him.

Because I thought that he just got money without any effort for earning money.

>>Because I thought that he just got money without any effort.
But, actually, he did many things to get an opportunity such as he endured the time when the stocks had decreased and he searched gathering information for the saving stocks when he got free time.

>>But, actually, he did many things to get an opportunity such as he endured the time when the stocks had decreased and he searched information to save stocks when he got free time.
Thus, I stopped getting feel jealous to him.
>>Thus, I stopped getting feel jealous of him.
Second, when an old brother who worked with me in Malaysia was hired from the big company and bought a car, I felt jealous since he got both that I wanted to have.

>>Second, when an old brother who worked with me in Malaysia was hired from a big company and bought a car, I felt jealous since he got both that I wanted to have.

Actually, he left the previous company giving me few hidden bombs which were kind of problems that gave me a lot of stress.

>>CORRECT!

That’s why I got jealous to him.

>>That’s why I got jealous of him.

But I stopped getting this kind of feeling to him due to the fact that the job that I work for matches to me and I like it.
>>CORRECT!
Anyways, I need to go to bed because I feel too tired today T.T
>>CORRECT!
See you tomorrow

>>See you tomorrow!

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