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2015-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

학생이 쓴 원문

Hello. My name is [이름]. I bought a tickets to the Classical Concert last week. I really want to watch it from a long time ago. Also, when I bought the tickets, I was really happy. However, something terrible happened. Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize. I have to go on a business trip that day. If you possible, I want to refund it. Can you refund it? If you impossible, I want to refund half of the price. Can you refund half of the price? I see. It is very difficult. However, the tickets' cost is very high. I am very poor. Please, call me.

강사 첨삭

Hello [이름]!   You tried your best to imagine a situation. Some reminders: 1. \'A\' is used before singular nouns. example: a ticket 2. A complex sentence has independent clause and dependent clause. example: If it\'s possible, I want you to refund it. 3. I want to refund it. (It means you will refund it.) I want you to refund it. (It means another person will refund it.)   Teacher Venus^^   Hello. My name is [이름]. >>>CORRECT I bought a tickets to the Classical Concert last week. >>>I bought tickets to the classical concert last week. I really want to watch it from a long time ago. >>>That\'s the concert I\'ve really wanted to see for a long time. Also, when I bought the tickets, I was really happy. >>>CORRECT However, something terrible happened. >>>CORRECT Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize. >>>CORRECT I have to go on a business trip that day. >>>CORRECT If you possible, I want to refund it. >>>If it\'s possible, I want you to refund it. Can you refund it? >>>CORRECT If you impossible, I want to refund half of the price. >>>If it\'s impossible, I want you to refund half of the price. Can you refund half of the price? >>>CORRECT   I see. It is very difficult.>>>I see that it\'s very difficult. However, the tickets\' cost is very high.>>>CORRECT   I am very poor.>>>CORRECT   Please, call me. >>>Please call me back.

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