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학생이 쓴 원문
Hello. My name is [이름].
I bought a tickets to the Classical Concert last week.
I really want to watch it from a long time ago.
Also, when I bought the tickets, I was really happy.
However, something terrible happened.
Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize.
I have to go on a business trip that day.
If you possible, I want to refund it.
Can you refund it?
If you impossible, I want to refund half of the price.
Can you refund half of the price?
I see.
It is very difficult.
However, the tickets' cost is very high.
I am very poor.
Please, call me.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
You tried your best to imagine a situation. Some reminders:
1. \'A\' is used before singular nouns.
example: a ticket
2. A complex sentence has independent clause and dependent clause.
example: If it\'s possible, I want you to refund it.
3. I want to refund it. (It means you will refund it.)
I want you to refund it. (It means another person will refund it.)
Teacher Venus^^
Hello. My name is [이름].
>>>CORRECT
I bought a tickets to the Classical Concert last week.
>>>I bought tickets to the classical concert last week.
I really want to watch it from a long time ago.
>>>That\'s the concert I\'ve really wanted to see for a long time.
Also, when I bought the tickets, I was really happy.
>>>CORRECT
However, something terrible happened.
>>>CORRECT
Before I tell you about it, I would like to apologize.
>>>CORRECT
I have to go on a business trip that day.
>>>CORRECT
If you possible, I want to refund it.
>>>If it\'s possible, I want you to refund it.
Can you refund it?
>>>CORRECT
If you impossible, I want to refund half of the price.
>>>If it\'s impossible, I want you to refund half of the price.
Can you refund half of the price?
>>>CORRECT
I see. It is very difficult.>>>I see that it\'s very difficult.
However, the tickets\' cost is very high.>>>CORRECT
I am very poor.>>>CORRECT
Please, call me.
>>>Please call me back.
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