48. Homework

I definitely think that things are really good if we use them in moderation^^

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Q. Should people stop using Facebook? Why or why not?
>>CORRECT!
In my opinion, it is useful to get the latest information through the Facebook, thus I don’t agree that people should stop using Facebook.

>>In my opinion, it is useful to get the latest information through the Facebook, thus I don’t agree that people should stop using it.

 In Korea, most people use it and it gives people beneficial ways.
>>In Korea, most people use it and it gives people benefits.
For example, owing to the its attribute that can spread out easily and fast, it helps people know and fix regarding bad issues of the government and society.
>>For example, owing to its attribute that it can spread news easily and fast, it helps people know and fix bad issues of the government and society.
Furthermore, it has helped to find people who was missing without any reason because their family posted their photos on it and the others who have read it pressed thumbs up it.
>>Furthermore, it has helped to find people who were missing without any reason because their family posted their photos on it and the others who have read it pressed thumbs up it.
Additionally, it makes congressperson think more about the violence in the school, regulations regarding of an abortion and the juvenile law since it has been critical issues that they have solving.
>>Additionally, it makes congress people think more about violence in school, regulations regarding abortion and the juvenile law since it has been a critical issue that they have solving.
On the other hands, it also affects bad way that the people might get wrong information which was made by someone due to the anonymity.
>>On the other hand, it also affects negatively in a way that people might get wrong information which was made by someone due to the anonymity.
For example, they will be able to bully other people easily using gossips since they wanted to make them down.

>>For example, they will be able to bully other people easily using gossips since they wanted to put them down.

Moreover, some people who use to reply bad comment without no reason, I think this kind of people must meet psychosis doctor, make others getting stress with serious problems in society.
>>Moreover, for some people who use to reply to bad comment without any reason, I think these kinds of people must meet a psychiatrist, because they make others stressed about serious problems in society.
 However, I think if this kind of bad things will be controlled by strict law, it might be reduced, furthermore, will be disappear soon.
>> However, I think if this kind of bad things will be controlled by strict law, it might be reduced; furthermore, it will disappear soon.
Thus, I don’t agree with the sentence, but I agree with the people who only write bad comments should stop using Facebook and have to be controlled by forced regulation.

>> Thus, I don’t agree with the sentence, but I agree that people only who write bad comments should stop using Facebook and have to be controlled by an enforced regulation.