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Hi [이름] [이름]! ^^
Make sure that the first letter of your sentences are in capital letters. :)
Thank you for making an effort in answering your homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.
1. my brother\'s favorite dessert is ice cream.
>>My brother\'s favorite dessert is ice cream.
2. my mother\'s favorite flavor of ice cream is cherry.
>>My mother\'s favorite flavor of ice cream is cherry.
3. my best friend\'s favorite brand of chocolate is Gana chocolate.
>>My best friend\'s favorite brand of chocolate is Gana chocolate.
4. my father\'s favorite kind of pie is cream pie.
>>My father\'s favorite kind of pie is cream pie.
5. my teacher\'s favorite kind of donut is chocolate donuts.
>>My teacher\'s favorite kind of donut is chocolate donuts.
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