49. Homework

Hello, Jason!(\",)

Wow! What a great idea. If this holiday will be created it will be a life changing holiday for the lives of the children but of course it needs a thorough planning in order for it to be successful. Anyway, you did an excellent job!(\",)

If I can create a new holiday, I would make it called ‘the travel day’ for finding an identity.
>> If I can create a new holiday, I would call it ‘the travel day’ for finding an identity.
Most people don’t know what they want to do and what they can do well until they become an adult.

>> correct!

Moreover, some people might not know that until they finish living.

>> correct!

OR>> Moreover, some people might not know that until their death.

Thus, I think it is important to find their identities.
>> correct!
So, they would find what they want to do or want to be for getting their achievement during journey since they will meet various people during the special holiday which made by me and will be getting advices from them in communication.

>> So, they would find what they want to do or want to achieve during their journey since they will meet various people and will be getting a lot of advice from them.

Furthermore, they will get different experiences too.
>> Furthermore, they will experience different things too.
This holiday will be held 7 days for the children during at second weeks in May.

>> This will be a 7-day holiday for the children on the second week of May.

And children can choose maximum continuous 4 days only among the day since I don’t want them make traffic jam.

>> The children can choose maximum of 4 continuous days  since I don’t want them to cause traffic jam.

They can go to travel everywhere they want without any payment because it will be paid by the tax.

>> They can go anywhere they want for free because it will be paid by the government.

OR>> They can travel anywhere they want for free.

The card which is offered by the government will be delivered to their homes before that holiday and they can use the card for their travelling expenses.

>> correct!

But they must know that they can spend money maximum 1,000,000 Won (47,620 Pesos).
>> But they can only spend a maximum of 1,000,000 Won (47,620 Pesos).
It might briskly help the economic activation since workers will work for preparing much kind of things before that day and earn money during this season.

>> It might help the economic situation since workers will work for preparing many things before that day and earn money during this season.

OR>> It will create jobs for the unemployed which will help boost the economy because there are many things needed before and during the holiday.
Furthermore, I guess that old generation is willing to pay their tax more because children are the hope for the future.
>> Furthermore, I guess that the taxpayers will be willing to pay more taxes because the children are the hope for the future.
Anyways, if I have an ability to make the holiday, I want to make this kind of holiday for the children since I couldn\'t find what I want to be and want to do before I got a job.

>> correct!

 I don\'t want them following the old generation\'s way.

>>correct!